Secrets of Dialogue & Narrative with bestselling author Connie Flynn

Secrets of Dialogue & Narrative with bestselling author Connie Flynn

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Level
Mixed
Basic and Premium Members Prices
Premium Member $30 & Basic Member $40
Category
  1. Editing
  2. Dialogue
  3. Voice
Dialogue is not hard to write. We all talk, don’t we? Sure we do. Except dialogue is not a record of real conversations. This course gives techniques that reveal characterization and move the plot along, while avoiding the obnoxious conversation habits real people often have. You’ll learn how to control dialogue, make it flow and snap, and what to look for when it needs fixed. The course ends with a section on how to add appropriate narrative that not only showcases the dialogue but incorporates it into plot movement.

The exercises consist of writing passages that show characters speaking, thinking, and relating to their story world. You will find that easier to do if you invent new characters just for this purpose. Working with characters you’ve grown to adore can resemble what one student described as “performing an appendectomy on my mother.”
Syllabus
COURSE OUTLINE
1 Dialogue Has Rules and No Rules.
  1. a Must provide information and mood.
  2. b Using tags and punctuation.
  3. c Internal and spoken dialogue.
  1. 2a How He Thinks is How He Speaks.
    1. a Preoccupations and concerns reveal character.
    2. b Reveals character trying to conceal self.
    3. c What they aren’t saying (subtext).
  2. 2b Techniques for Dynamic Dialogue.
    1. a Sentence length.
    2. b Word choice and order (syntax).
    3. c Misdirection and interruption.
3 Weave in Narrative.
a b c d
Sensory blocks and summary lines.
Proportion and balance.
When to tell, when to show.
Using punctuation to control meaning.
Author
conflynn
Start date
Aug 22, 2016 at 9:00 AM
End date
Sep 11, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Registration end date
Aug 24, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Rating
5.00 star(s) 4 ratings

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Connie Flynn's class on dialogue was a toughie for me. I had thought I had a good grip on riveting dialogue, but I was so wrong. Connie's a fantastic teacher and even she said I was fighting her every inch of the way in her assignments. Not meaning that I was combative or rude, but that I couldn't loosen up enough to simply do what she asked me to. Finally in the last assignment, I let go and wrote two pages of pure dialogue with no tags and had the characters tell the plot of the story in conversation only. I had never done this before! I was so proud of myself and felt so EMPOWERED. It's as if Connie had thrown me in the lake, and I sure as hell learned how to swim in that last assignment. She was so patient with me. Her compliments at the end were manna from heaven. I've been bragging on her ever since. Thanks, Connie, for putting up with me in class. And thanks, SavvyAuthors, for introducing me to Connie. Since joining Savvy a year ago this October, I have learned so much.