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    Lecture WEEK 12: Scheduling

    I can make it at the 3 pm PST / 5 pm CST meeting.
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    Discussion Zoom calls Thursday, April 1, at 2:30 central and 6 pm central

    Sorry I missed this. Last week was Easter break for my boys and I was a bit distracted.
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    Discussion ZOOM CALL PUSHED TO 3:30 central today (March 25)!!

    Thank you! My son got out late from tutoring and I just got home.
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    Lecture WEEK 10: Revising and Polishing

    I can do 12:30 PST / 2:30 pm CST on Thursday.
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    Question Timeline

    Am I missing anything with this timeline? Tuesday Sissy and Sassy are at the fundraising party Wednesday Evening church for the twins where they chat with Callie and Karina Thursday Sissy and Sassy pick up their outfits for the murder mystery party train ride See Karina duck into the...
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    Homework Trouble With Christmas Cheer Synopsis

    Thanks for all your feedback. I really hadn't considered the ghost/supernatural angle but I think I can definitely work that in. As for the murder mystery dinner, it becomes more of a subplot, right? I just didn't know where to put it in the synopsis.
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    Homework Trouble With Christmas Cheer Synopsis

    Hello! I cannot for the life of me remember which week the plot synopsis goes to so I'm just tossing it under the Homework category. Feel free to take a look at it and offer feedback if you want.
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    Goals Introduce yourself and list your goal!

    Hi all! I'm April and I write romance, cozy mystery, and romantic mystery. Do you sense a theme? :) Like Dawn, I "cut my teeth" on Johanna Lindsay and Jude Devereaux, even going so far as handing off the book to my besties after every chapter so we could all be on the same page (quite...
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    Lecture WEEK 7: Dialogue, Dialogue Tags, and Body Language

    I can do it on Friday but it must be no later than 4ish PM PST. I have a standing game on Friday nights that begins at 6:30 and I still have to make dinner before that. But I'm always down for a Zoom call!
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    Discussion Zoom Link for Saturday, Feb. 27, at 2 p.m. central

    Ugh. I missed it again! I thought the invite converted the time to PST but it didn't and I thought it meant 2 pm PST, not CST.
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    Lecture Zoom link for Wednesday, Feb. 24, at 6:30 pm central

    And thanks to the flu, I missed yet another meeting. I hope there's another one soon.
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    Homework Week2 Homework - do over for Lisa Siefert

    Do you mind if I look at it?
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    Discussion Zoom call this Friday, Feb. 19, at 6:30 p.m. central?

    Friday at 4:30 PM Pacific is fine with me but I'll have to leave at 5:30 pm to make dinner for the family. If we meet on Saturday, I can't meet after 2 pm PST. Anytime before that is fine though.
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    Homework Trad Question

    I think you should place the story in the setting that makes the most sense to you, the author, and the storyteller, as I truly believe that readers can tell if the writing is passionate about a character and storyline. I think that, between writing to market and writing a story that makes you...