Recent content by Sue McCallum

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    Welcome to the Brainstorming Corner

    Working very nicely. Thanks!
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    Welcome to the Brainstorming Corner

    I'm a bit prehistoric so would you tell me about STYLES. Thanks.
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    Welcome to the Brainstorming Corner

    Leslie, Thanks for this Brainstorming corner. It's something that everyone could use. Bravo. Sue
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    Welcome to the Brainstorming Corner

    Diana. I'm going to do what you suggested. I'll keep adding sentences and hopefully land a perfect one. I can keep writing without over thinking that first sentence. Like Leslie said, Brilliant! Thanks.
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    Welcome to the Brainstorming Corner

    Gosh I hope so. Cuz as many first lines as I've come up, not one is epic !? I'll keep the goal of having the middle rock rather than the first line. Thanks!
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    How To... How to write the perfect first line...or not!

    Gosh I hope so. Cuz as many first lines as I've come up, not one is epic !? I'll keep the goal of having the middle rock rather than the first line. Thanks!
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    Welcome to the Brainstorming Corner

    So why can't I write the first sentence? You know the one that takes you to the second sentence? For some reason I can write the next 3 thousand sentences but the first one sucks. What should I do? I want an amazing sentence so the reader will continue reading my almost done book. Thanks.
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    How To... How to write the perfect first line...or not!

    So why can't I write the first sentence? You know the one that takes you to the second sentence? For some reason I can write the next 3 thousand sentences but the first one sucks. What should I do? I want an amazing sentence so the reader will continue reading my almost done book. Thanks.