Sorry these are so late! I'm completely behind this week.
I really appreciate all the feedback I'm getting so thank you to everyone who took the time to critique my pages. You guys are the best!
This is the first set of my pages for critique.
I would love a general critique. What do you think of the characters? Would you continue on or stop reading and why? Is there something in the manuscript that doesn't make sense to you or needs clarification?
I'm an experienced...