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Unbreak your query by fixing these five bad things with Patrick Hopkins

Business Unbreak your query by fixing these five bad things with Patrick Hopkins

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Level
Mixed
Category
  1. Business
  2. Writer's Life
In this intensive, you'll look at five common problems with bad queries and how to fix them.

Unbreak your query by fixing these five bad things:
  1. Verbs that do nothing
  2. Nouns that should be verbs
  3. Modifiers that kill action by turning it into facts
  4. Telling language that should be showing
  5. Stakes that aren’t stakes
Author
Patrick Hopkins
Start date
Sep 10, 2021 at 9:00 AM
End date
Sep 12, 2021 at 6:00 PM
Registration end date
Sep 12, 2021 at 5:00 PM
Rating
4.92 star(s) 13 ratings

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Great insights into how to fix a query! You just see that Patrick knows his stuff. Thanks for this intensive!
vickiewrites
Patrick is friendly and informative. I learned a lot and hope the lessons will create a positive query experience, especially since I haven't had one yet. I'm giving 4 stars only because it was not my definition of intensive as advertised. Otherwise, this is a great class with a lot of info.
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