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    Lecture Sign up for an appointment

    June I can sign up for Thursday at 9. Denny
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    Kim is a more complex character than Tim. She has a lot of phobias and quirks whereas at the...

    Kim is a more complex character than Tim. She has a lot of phobias and quirks whereas at the moment Tim doesn't. Kim also is a nonconformist. She shies aways from large groups and tends to interact either 1:1 or in very small groups. People tend to fear what they don't understand. Maybe that is...
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    Hi Deborah, Kim is going to concentrate on her studies since she wants to get into a special...

    Hi Deborah, Kim is going to concentrate on her studies since she wants to get into a special high school. (Maybe she can take up a hobby.) In my original ms I wrote that. but realize that is was too much information dumped in the first chapter. Yes, it does change her interactions and I can...
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    Homework Homework for Lesson Two

    The Heroine's Journey Lesson 2 HW 2 Denny Heroine- Kim Armstrong 1. What is the Betrayal or Realization (also called, The Inciting Incident) that prompts your character to start off on her Journey? My heroine's inciting incident or realization which in my wip is really a betrayal (I understand...
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    Homework Homework for Lesson One

    The Heroine's Journey HW#1 1. Where is your heroine's Perfect World? My heroine Kim's Perfect World is anything but perfect. She is undergoing the trials and tribulations of attending Middle School in present day New York City. What are her feelings about it? Kim is neither a child or an...
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    Discussion Introduction to Classmates

    Hi everyone, I 'm Denny, from NY. I write PBs and MG. My WIP is a MG fantasy about a tween girl who is forced in a world she never knew existed. She's definitely a reluctant heroine who has many quirks. Her twin brother is her sidekick rather than the other way around. I have just recently gone...
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    From the Admins... PLEASE READ: Note on First Posting

    Look forward to another great class with @Pamela Jaye Smith ! Thanks for the opportunity @RJand all the other great classes/ event at Savvy. Denny
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    Lecture CHAT anyone? Here's a poll

    And day would work preferably between 4-8. But I can be flexible and do other times as well.
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    @lrdavis , you are far from being an ignoramus: BV is Barbara Vey is a book blogger that runs...

    @lrdavis , you are far from being an ignoramus: BV is Barbara Vey is a book blogger that runs events that has romance writers interact with their readers. It had turned into a weekend extravaganza with Q&A, bingo, luncheon, pizza party and breakfast over a weekend in April in Milwaukee. Denny
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    They sure were; hope to make one of the cruises someday!

    They sure were; hope to make one of the cruises someday!
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    Welcome Winnie, we´ve met at one of the BV weekends. Denny

    Welcome Winnie, we´ve met at one of the BV weekends. Denny
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    Good to see you< Lyn. Denny

    Good to see you< Lyn. Denny
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    Announcement PLEASE INTRODUCE YOURSELVES

    Hi @Sunny Irene Roth and @lrdavis good to see you both again. Hi everybody, nice to meet you! I'm Denny Side from NY. If you have written picture books before; Yes, I have five finished stories, a couple of drafts and outlines What your goals are for the workshop? My goals are to get...
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    Lecture Lesson 3: Understanding Voice

    Denny's Exercise 2 - I would appreciate anybody in the class's opinion on this. I am still writing... The worst day of my life started innocently enough and it was only the first day of school. I walked through the halls so much more confident than last year. Sixth grade was a year of...
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    That fits both my stories but in one story the heroine and hero are fourteen can it be like the...

    That fits both my stories but in one story the heroine and hero are fourteen can it be like the Harry Potter books where they start out young and age. That way they discover more about themselves and the world they live in as they get older.