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    Jim Harrington replied to the thread Fortnight Flash Fiction Winner The Show Must Go On.

    Nicely done. The first paragraph sets the story up, but I wonder if it's needed. The first four lines of dialog accomplish the same...

    Feb 27, 2024
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    Jim Harrington reacted to Rose Gardener's post in the thread Fortnight Flash Fiction Winner FROM THE TERRACE by GRACE PETERSON GLOVER with Like.

    The opening line is that the house phone was ringing. After answering the landline she checked her mobile for messages. :)

    Feb 3, 2024
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    Jim Harrington replied to the thread Fortnight Flash Fiction Winner FROM THE TERRACE by GRACE PETERSON GLOVER.

    Your story reads smoothly and sets up well. I think you could drop the realtor. His part just ins't that big. Especially in flash, you...

    Jan 30, 2024

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